LEVIATHAN vs EDEN
@Leviathan:
Attacks 51/65
Dodge 28/35
TOTAL: 79
@Eden:
Attacks 55/65
Dodge 0/35
TOTAL: 55
Attacks 51/65
- 21/25
I like the way he throws around his size and uses it to take her hits, I think this reflects his stats p well with health being higher!
- 17/25
They were all pretty straightforward and easy to read, but it loses some points from me because of how short they were. Really liked him turning into a battering ram lmao
- 13/15
All of the attacks were short, but concise and easy to figure out what he was doing. The entire post gave a pretty good feel for Levi as well!
Dodge 28/35
- 14/15
Based on his size and the short notice he seemed to have gotten, I like that you still had him take some damage out of this
- 11/15
Honestly I kind of laughed at the mental image of this behemoth running out of the way just in time--that being said, it was a pretty plain dodge, but it def did it's job
- 3/5
Not much stood out to be, got a little hard to understand there due to some of the wording and longer sentences. You do however get a really good feel of Levi and I like that
TOTAL: 79
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Attacks 55/65
- 20/25
Leading up to the first attack, I really like that she sizes him up instead of charging blindly. I would have liked to see some more damage taken based off of her stats tho!
- 22/25
I like that she uses him to spin her around into the rear and slides into a stop to literally pull his hair. I would have liked to
- 13/15
Easy and fun to read through, there was a bit of repetition but few grammatical errors that I noticed. Though the anatomist in me is dying to point out that “occipital” is not the bone you’re looking for in the first attack—that forms the back of the skull! “Orbital socket” is what I assumed you wanted.
Dodge 0/35
- 0/15
- 0/15
- 0/5
TOTAL: 55
