LEVIATHAN vs EDEN
@Eden:
Attacks 54/65
Dodge 0/35
GRAND TOTAL: 56
@Leviathan:
Attacks 54/65
Dodge 23/35
GRAND TOTAL: 77
Attacks 54/65
- 23/25
Attacks were creative (particularly using Levi's hit to help her spin around quickly) and incorporated Leviathan's actions well to fuel retaliation.
- 20/25
I would have liked to see the damage taken have a little bit more of a toll, as Eden's health stats are a good chunk lower than her attack.
- 13/15
Few grammar mistakes, explanation of attacks clear and easy to understand.
Block
Dodge 0/35
- 0?/15
No blocks to score.
- 0?/15
No blocks to score.
- 0?/5
No blocks to score.
GRAND TOTAL: 56
@Leviathan:
Attacks 54/65
- 20/25
Attacks were very straight-forward; Levi definitely took advantage of his larger size (as he should!), but sacrifices some flare in order to do so.
- 22/25
The amount of damage taken seemed accurate when looking at Levi's health stat, it did not hinder him too much and I feel his slightly lower attack stat was well-reflected.
- 13/15
Few grammar mistakes, attacks were to-the-point and easily imagined in my mind.
Dodge 23/35
- 10/15
Pretty simple block, nothing too fancy but did the trick to avoid heavier damage.
- 10/15
Well-executed and realistic
- 3/5
Nothing too notable, some of it was a wee bit choppy and could have been made into a new sentence rather than incorporating commas.
GRAND TOTAL: 77